In this lecture we will learn:
• Typical writing situation
• The questions readers ask most often
• Superstructure for feasibility reports
– Introduction
– Criteria
• Two ways of presenting criteria
• Importance of presenting criteria early
• Sources of your criteria
• Four common types of criteria
In this lecture we will learn:
– Method of obtaining facts
– Overview of alternatives
• Evaluation
– Choose carefully between the alternating and
divided patterns
– Dismiss obviously unsuitable alternatives
– Put your most important point first
In this lecture we will learn:
• Conclusions
• Recommendations
• Sample outlines
• Planning guide
• Sample feasibility reports
Typical Writing Situation:
• All feasibility reports share one essential
characteristic: they are written to help
decision-makers choose between two or
more courses of action.
• Even when a feasibility report seems to
focus primarily on one course of action, the
readers are always considering a second
course: to leave things the way they are.
Typical Writing Situation:
• An example of leaving things the way they
are is to continue to use metal parts rather
than plastic parts in the sailboats.
• In many situations, however, you readers
will already have decided that some change
is necessary and will be choosing between
two or more alternatives to the status quo.
The Questions Readers Ask Most Often:
• As they think about the choice they must
make, decision-makers ask many questions.
• From situation to situation, these basic
questions remain the same.
• That’s what makes it possible for one
superstructure to be useful across nearly the
full range of situations in which people
prepare feasibility reports.
The Questions Readers Ask Most Often:
• Why is it important for us to consider these
alternatives?
• Are your criteria reasonable and
appropriate?
• Are our facts reliable?
• What are the important features of the
alternatives?
The Questions Readers Ask Most
Often
• How do the alternatives tack up against
your criteria?
• What overall conclusions do you draw
about the alternatives?
• What do you think we should do?
Why is it important for us to consider these alternatives?
• Decision-makers ask this question because
they want to know why they have to make
any choice in the first place.
• Your readers may need a detailed
explanation of a problem to appreciate the
importance of considering alternative
courses of action.
Why is it important for us to consider these alternatives?
• On the other hand, if the readers are familiar
with the problem, they may see the
importance of considering the alternatives if
you simply remind them of the situation.
Are your criteria reasonable and appropriate?
• To help your readers choose between the
alternative courses of action, you must
evaluate the alternatives in terms of specific
criteria.
• At work, people want these criteria to
reflect the needs and aims of their
organization.
Are your facts reliable?:
• Decision-makers want to be sure that your
facts are reliable before they take any action
based on those facts.
What are the important features of the alternatives?
• So that they can understand your detailed
discussion of the alternatives, readers want
you to present an overview that highlights
the key features of each alternative.
How do the alternatives stack up against your criteria?
• The heart of a feasibility study is your
evaluation of the alternatives in terms of
your criteria.
• Your readers want to know the results.
What overall conclusions do you
draw about the alternatives?
• Based upon your detailed evaluation of the
alternatives, you will reach some general
conclusion about the merits of each.
• Decision-makers need to know your
conclusions because these overall
judgments form the basis for decision-making.
What do you think we should do?
• In the end, your readers must choose one of
the alternative courses of action.
• Because of your expertise on the subject,
they want to help them by telling what you
recommend.
Superstructure for Feasibility Reports
• To answer your readers’ questions about
your feasibility studies, you can use a
superstructure that has the following seven
elements:
– Introduction
– Criteria
– Method of obtaining facts
Superstructure for Feasibility
Reports
• Overview of alternatives
• Evaluation
• Conclusions
• Recommendations
Superstructure for Feasibility Reports
• Of course, you may combine the elements
in many different ways, depending on your
situation.
• For instance, you may integrate your
conclusions into your evaluation, or you
may omit a separate discussion of criteria if
they need no special explanation.
Superstructure for Feasibility Reports
• But whether to include each of the seven
elements, based upon your understanding of
your purpose, audience, and situation.
• In the remaining part of this lecture, we will
explain how you can develop each of the
seven elements to create an effective
feasibility report.
Introduction:
• In the introduction to a feasibility report you
should answer your readers’ question,
“Why is it important for us to consider these
alternatives?”
• The most persuasive way to answer this
question is to identify the problem your
feasibility study will help your readers solve
or the goal it will help them achieve.
Introduction:
• Be sure to identify a problem or goal that is
significant from the point of view of your
employer or client.
• Significant goals could include reducing the
number of rejected parts, increasing your
productivity, and so on.
Introduction:
• Consider, for example, the way Fawaz
wrote the introduction of a feasibility report
he prepared.
• A process engineer in a paper mill, Fawaz
was asked to evaluate the feasibility of
substituting one ingredient for another in
the furnish for one of the papers it produces.
Introduction:
• At present we rely on the titanium
dioxide in our furnish to provide the
high brightness and opacity we desire
in our paper. However… the price of
titanium dioxide has been rising
steadily and rapidly for several years.
We now pay roughly $1400 per ton for
titanium dioxide, or about 70 cents per
pound.
problem
Introduction:
• Some mills are now replacing some of
the titanium dioxide in their furnish
with silicate extenders. Because the
average price for silicate extenders is
only $500 per ton, well under half the
cost titanium dioxide, the savings are
very great.
possible solution
Introduction:
• To determine whether we could enjoy a
similar savings for our 30-pound book
paper, I have studied the physical
properties, material handling require-ments,
and cost of two silicate extend-ers,
Tri-Sil 606 and Zenolux 26 T.
What the writer did to investigate the possible solution
Introduction:
• Generally, the introduction to a long
feasibility report (and most short ones)
should also include a preview of the main
conclusions and, perhaps, the major
recommendations.
• Fawaz included his major conclusion:
Introduction:
• I conclude that one of the silicate
extenders, Zenolux 26 T, looks
promising enough to be tested in a mill
run.
• As another example, consider the way Shazi
wrote the introduction of a feasibility report
she prepared for the board of directors of
the bank that employs her….
Introduction:
• Ellen was asked to evaluate the feasibility
of opening a new branch in a particular
suburban community.
• She begins by announcing the topic of her
report:
• This report discusses the feasibility
of opening a branch office of Al-Shami
Bank in Gulberg, Lahore.
Introduction:
• Then, after giving a sentence of background
information about the source of the bank’s interest
in exploring this possibility, Shazi emphasized the
importance of such a feasibility study:
• In the past, Al-Shami bank has
approached the opening of new branches
with great care, which is undoubtedly a
major reason why it has become the most
successful small, privately owned
financial institution in Gulberg.
Introduction
• Shazi also included her major conclusions:
• Overall, Gulberg offers an enticing
opportunity, but would present Al-Shami
Bank with some challenges it has not
faced before.
Introduction:
• The introduction of a feasibility report is often
combined with one or more of the other six
elements, such as the description of the criteria, a
discussion of the method of obtaining facts, or an
overview of the alternatives.
• In addition, the opening of a feasibility report may
also include various kinds of background,
explanatory, and forecasting information.
Criteria:
• Criteria are the standards that you apply in a
feasibility study to evaluate the alternative
courses of action that you are considering.
• For instance, to assess the feasibility of
opening the new branch office, Shazi uses
many criteria.
Criteria:
• Those criteria may include
– The existence of a large enough market
– A good possibility of attracting depositors away
from the competition
– The likelihood that profits on the deposits at the
branch will exceed the expenses of operating it
– The reasonableness of the financial outlay
required to open the office
Two Ways of Presenting Criteria:
• Devote a
separate section to identifying and
explaining the m:Writers
often do this in
long reports or in reports where the criteria
themselves require extended explanation.
•
Integrate your presentation of them into
other elements of the repor t:
Fawaz did this
in the following sentence from the third
paragraph of his introduction.
Two Ways of Presenting Criteria:
• To determine whether we could enjoy a
similar savings for our 30-pound book
paper, I have studied the physical
properties, material handling require-ments,
and cost of two silicate extend-ers,
Tri-Sil 606 and Zenolux 26 T.
Criteria named
Two Ways of Presenting Criteria:
• For each of the general criteria named in the
quoted sentence, Fawaz had some more
specific criteria.
• For instance, at the beginning of his
discussion of the physical properties of the
two extenders, he named the three
properties he evaluated.
Importance of Presenting Criteria:
Early
• There are three good reasons for presenting
your criteria early in your report:
• First, your readers know that the validity of
your conclusions depends on the criteria
you use to evaluate the alternatives, and
they want to evaluate the criteria
themselves.
Importance of Presenting Criteria:
Early
• Second, your discussion of the criteria tells
your readers a great deal about the scope of
your study.
• Third, your decision of the alternative
courses of action will make much more
sense to your readers if they know in
advance the criteria of their evaluation.
Sources of Your Criteria:
• Often the person who asks you to undertake
a study will simply tell you what criteria to
apply.
• In other situations, your readers may expect
you to identify the relevant criteria for them
based on technical knowledge that you
possess.
Four Common Types of Criteria:
• As you develop your criteria, you may find
it helpful to know that at work, criteria often
address one or more of the following
questions:
– Will the course of action really do what’s
wanted?
– Can we implement it?
– Can we afford it?
– Is it desirable?
Methods of Obtaining Facts:
• When you tell how you obtained your facts,
you answer your readers’ question, “Are
your facts reliable?”
• That is, by showing that you used reliable,
you assure your readers that your facts form
a sound basis for your decision-making.
Method of Obtaining Facts:
• The source of your facts will depend upon the
nature of your study:
– research
– Calls to manufacturers
– Interviews
– Meetings with other experts in your organization
– Surveys
– Laboratory research
Method of Obtaining Facts:
• The amount of detail you need to supply depends
upon your readers and situation, but in each case
your goal is to say enough to satisfy your readers
that your information is trustworthy.
• For example, Shazi used some fairly technical
procedures to estimate the amount of deposits that
Al-Shami Bank could expect from a new branch in
Gulberg, Lahore.
Method of Obtaining Facts:
• Deciding where describe your methods depends
on how many different techniques you used.
• If you used one or two techniques, you could
describe each in a paragraph or section, but if you
used several techniques, each pertaining to a
different part of your analysis, you might mention
each of them at the point at which you discuss the
results obtained.
Overview of Alternatives:
• Before you begin your detailed evaluation
of the alternatives, you must be ure that
your readers understand what the
alternatives are.
• Sometimes you need to devote only a few
words to that task
Overview of Alternatives:
• For example, imagine that you worked for a chain
of convenience stores that has asked you to
investigate the feasibility of increasing starting
salaries for store managers as a way of attracting
stronger applications for job openings.
• Surely, your readers will not require any special
explanation to understand the course of action you
are assessing.
Overview of Alternatives:
• However, you may sometimes need to provide
extensive background information or otherwise
explain the alternative to your readers.
• For example, when Jahangir needed to report on a
feasibility of replacing his employer’s company-owned
building- wide telephone system, he helped
his readers piece together the more detailed
comments he later made in his point-by-point
evaluation of the systems.
Evaluation:
• The heart of a feasibility report is the
detailed evaluation of the course or courses
of action you studied.
• In most feasibility studies, writers organize
their evaluation sections around their
criteria.
Evaluation:
• For example, in her study of the feasibility
of opening a new branch office of a bank,
Shazi devoted one section to the size of the
market, another to the competition, a third
to prospective income and expenses, and so
on.
Conclusions:
• Your conclusions are your overall
assessment of the feasibility of the courses
of action you studied.
• You might present your conclusions in two
or three places in your report.
• You should certainly mention them in
summary form near the beginning.
Recommendations:
• It is customary to end a feasibility report by
answering the decision-maker’s question “What
do you think we should do?”
• Sometimes your recommendations will pertain
directly to the course of action you studied: “Do
this” or “Don’t do it”
• You may also discover that you were unable to
gather all the information you needed to make a
firm recommendation.
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In this lecture we learnt:
• Typical writing situation
• The questions readers ask most often
• Superstructure for feasibility reports
– Introduction
– Criteria
• Two ways of presenting criteria
• Importance of presenting criteria early
• Sources of your criteria
• Four common types of criteria
In this lecture we learnt:
– Method of obtaining facts
– Overview of alternatives
• Evaluation
– Choose carefully between the alternating and
divided patterns
– Dismiss obviously unsuitable alternatives
– Put your most important point first
In this lecture we learnt:
• Conclusions
• Recommendations
• Sample outlines
• Planning guide
• Sample feasibility reports
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